Book 1 – Chapter 16 Real Power

Author notes: Hi guys, here is your second chapter of the day. A little short but extra hot so have a blast. Also this chapter is an extra treat for you today to make up for yesterdays absence.

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Real Power:

          Big sis Vera was watching the man called Dowen with blood shot eyes. Mycroft upon seeing Vera was dumbstruck and was seeing her with lust all over his face. She gradually took her eyes of Dowen and carefully inspected me, after seeing that I had no injuries she sighed in relief.

           In a second she was beside me carefully inspecting me once again  closely. I was baffled because I was a captive just a second ago but now I was free. Inspecting my surroundings I saw the gruesome corpse of that fellow Dowen a few feet away, as well as the fearful and surprised looks of the flying experts.

              After inspecting me big sis Vera took a look at Sylvie and then stuffed a pill in my mouth. She then said ‘ That is a Divine life pill. Its effects will last for a year, during this time all injuries will be healed at a fast pace also it has detoxification properties so you will be safe even if that snake poisons you accidentally ‘

          Sylvie made a angry hiss at big sis Vera’s words. Even if she can’t talk yet she can perfectly understand the human language so she was angry at her comment but she knew that she cannot possibly defeat this person who has killed an immortal expert so she kept her calm and did not attack her.

            Big sis Vera seeing Sylvie hiss laughed a little and said ‘ Say your complaints when you can protect your master girl ‘ saying this she turned around to face Mycroft and others who were watching us from the sky in a enquiring manner. Mycroft once again shows his cautiousness just like in his battle with Gerald by not sending an another expert here, never underestimate a unknown enemy.

             Finally after examining  us for a while he spoke in a neutral tone   ‘ Fellow disciple, I know that you are the master of that kid. You should also be the person who stole our divine treasure. I know from your attack just now that you should be a peak divine disciple as well, else you couldn’t have killed Dowen a beginner divine disciple so easily.

               I will ignore that you have killed a member of retribution church in front of me so just give us that god beast along with your disciple and I will let you go.

        We peak divine disciples don’t care for mortals much less accept a mere mortal as our disciple, so you should have taken him in as a helper. It is not good to have enmity between us for a mere mortal so accept my proposal  sister ‘
      
          After talking he maintained a polite smile expecting a positive response. Gerald did speak truth this guy was too good at acting even though the tone and the expression he used is polite but the words themselves were evil. He indirectly indicated to hand over me or he will kill both big sis Vera and me, also he brought the name of the Retribution Church to force the person on my side to betray me in fear of making enemies with a powerful organisation.
         
     Big sis Vera after listening the whole conversation turned towards me and said ‘ Stay here Riddick. I have some work to do now ‘. After that she kissed me on my forehead and flew.

          Upon reaching near Mycroft she talked in a pitying tone ‘ Do you have any last words Mycroft? ‘

Mycroft’s POV :

I ordered Dowen to tear off the boys arms and was watching the show when suddenly a thundering voice rang out. Upon seeing her I was dumbstruck. She was a beauty I have never seen all my life, even the most beautiful of all females I have ever seen can’t compare to her.

         When did this material plane produce such a beauty. I have to get her for myself, both teacher and disciple are a good harvest  I thought this internally and laughed.

            I was suddenly startled when she killed Dowen effortlessly because I thought her to be a beginner immortal but she is unexpectedly a peak stage disciple. This was a surprise but I was not fearful of her because all true kings who can kill people like me are very well known in higher planes so no one offends them. She must be some one who have trained secretly till now.

        I gave her a good proposal where she can keep her life but has to sacrifice her disciple. Usually the church rules prevent any one who have a glimpse into its secrets not to be left alive but I gave her this choice because I thought it was a waste to kill such a heavenly beauty.

         I was waiting for the answer when she finally came after saying goodbye to the boy. She flew over and said in a deadly voice which gave shivers to me
‘ Do you have any last words Mycroft? ‘

               I was suddenly taken aback. No this was not how it should have been.

Riddick’s POV :

        After big sis Vera said those words she extended her index and middle fingers of her right hand in a manner where a V shaped was formed between them. Suddenly the surrounding wind became chaotic and she simply made a cutting gesture with her fingers.

         The sudden ripple burst forth from her, cutting the space into two half’s. The space along with every thing in a one kilometre straight line was cut into half. Two experts who were in the line of cut were cleanly cut into two half’s.

            I was shocked to death seeing that attack, I thought the immortals fighting before were pretty awesome but comparing their attacks to this, their powers are nothing.

      Mycroft face lost all colour upon seeing that attack he immediately shouted retreat and was about to go but to his shock he saw that every expert except him were already dead.

             Void explained the dumbfounded me that big sis Vera after executing that attack cast a spell called space distortion which will suck everything into it and crush them to death. Mycroft is only alive because big sis Vera did not let him die.

         Mycroft understanding the position he was in, hurriedly bowed his head and pleaded ‘ My lady, this ignorant brother committed a grave mistake in trying to harm your disciple. Please spare this worthless one’s life, I will definitely be grateful for this my entire life ‘

          Big sis Vera snorted coldly and said ‘ Spare you, are you dreaming? Give me one good reason as to why I should spare you. ‘

       Mycroft respectfully said again ‘ My lady, I have a good relation with the great bishop of Retribution church so I think he will be thankful to you and will owe you a favour ‘

              Big sis Vera laughed again and said ‘ Have the great bishop owe
me a favour. Why would I want that when I can kill him and erase the Retribution church from existence whenever I want ‘
           
 
     Listening to big sis Vera’s words Mycroft face turned blue and he said ‘ My lady, the Retribution church had been in existence for many millennia it is impossible for any person to erase it unless they are…………….. No it can’t be. You are not from the great divine planes.  why would a person from great divine planes come here and accept a mere mortal disciple ‘

      Big sis Vera angrily spoke ‘ Indeed I’m from great divine planes as to why I am here I have no reason to tell you
     Enough talk, now die ‘

     Big sis Vera extended her hand again and made a fist slowly as if crushing something in it while at the same time the space around Mycroft completely distorted and crushed him without even letting a single squeak escape from it.

            After killing him big sis Vera landed near me and hugged me to her bosom. She whispered to me ‘ Don’t let this incident trouble you. I will remove all obstacles in your path, for now only concentrate on reaching immortal stage as soon as possible. Everything will be apparent by then ‘

       She then bent down slightly and looked into my eyes, these past years I have grown much and was already 160 cm tall. By now I was only a little shorter than big sis Vera. She suddenly brought her lips down and kissed me deeply, this was a sensation I never felt from her before, a sensation of deep desire towards an opposite gender.
      

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46 thoughts on “Book 1 – Chapter 16 Real Power

  1. Vera will be kinda seducing MC…

    After Void is released from the prison.. they’ll betray MC

    And apparently Void’s lover is Vera…

    SOOOOOOO NTRRRR!

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    • didn’t void also use the chaos divine energy to bind Sylvie to Riddik? so what happens after their deal is finished and Riddik looses the chaos affinity? will she abandon him too and follow void…

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  2. Thanks for the monrning treat. πŸ˜€
    Maybe I just woke up but only found one mistake
    Have the great bishop own me a favour.
    That’s a rehetorical question and for both cases it should be ‘owe me a favour’
    Becomes:
    Have the great bishop owe me a favour?

    Loving Vera character ( ^Ο‰^ )

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  3. didn’t void also use the chaos divine energy to bind Sylvie to Riddik? so what happens after their deal is finished and Riddik looses the chaos affinity? will she abandon him too and follow void..

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  4. It seems i didn’t explain it clearly. Here’s what i wanted to see changed.

    Mycroft respectfully said again β€˜ My lady, I have [b][u]a[/u][/b] good relation with the great bishop of Retribution church so I think he will be thankful to you and will [s]own[/s] [b][u]owe[/u][/b] you a favour β€˜

    Big sis Vera laughed again and said β€˜ Have the great bishop owe
    me a favour[b][u]?[/u][/b] Why would I want that[b][u]?[/u][/b] I can kill him and erase the Retribution church from existence whenever I want β€˜

    instead of the ? you can add a [b][u]when[/u][/b] : Why would I want that [b][u]when[/u][/b] I can kill him and erase the Retribution church from existence whenever I want β€˜

    Had to use royalroadl for that formatting lol. πŸ˜‰

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    • lmao it did not work
      haha ha he im sad…………………………………………………………
      let me try again
      Mycroft respectfully said again β€˜ My lady, I have a good relation with the great bishop of Retribution church so I think he will be thankful to you and will own owe you a favour β€˜

      Big sis Vera laughed again and said β€˜ Have the great bishop owe
      me a favour? Why would I want that? I can kill him and erase the Retribution church from existence whenever I want β€˜

      instead of the ? you can add a when : Why would I want that when I can kill him and erase the Retribution church from existence whenever I want β€˜

      Let us see if this works now *fingers crossed*

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      • Don’t worry for next chapter edits and errors i will be using different colours and different fonts(if needed). Must be hard for you to see where i made changes.

        PS: Am i weird for having so many replies to myself.
        PSS: Is this the longest chain of comments? I deserve a prize. I want my chapter now. I want Vera’s …………… …… …………. ……………………. . (attention) [what were you thinking with your dirty mind]

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      • No worries Kyra, contrarily I am happy that you are using your precious time for pointing out my mistakes. Hopefully I will start writing my chapters with less mistakes in a few months ( LOL ) I can’t promise improvement faster because English is not my first language so bear with me.

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  5. Good one. I hope that kiss isn’t like “I hate love” said to void. I don’t like this type of action in story “sad”. Will there be new chapter today? Sorry about mistakes i can understand english but not write.

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    • Well, the answer is in book 5 – Chapter 6 and 7. The age isn’t really a matter really also, Riddick is 13 and a half years here so… Still age really isn’t a matter of concern. You will understand why if you reach book 5.

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